Discuss both of views and give your opinion.
The impetus behind the development of society is generated by people from all walks of life, especially politicians and scientists. People pass different judgments on them and it seems hard to define whose accomplishment is superior to the other.
There is no denying that politicians exert tremendous influence on the society, regardless of eras. They are entitled to represent the country and its citizens, with the authority conferred by law. As policy makers, their decisions and instructions may manipulate the situation of the country and even the whole world. For instance, the reform and opening-up policy, proposed by the great politician — Deng Xiaoping, brings China a brand-new look; its far-reaching impact has lasted so far and will remain effective. However, it is a remarkable fact that wrong decisions sometimes leads to disasters; the war is a good case in point.
Scientists are also regarded as an indispensable part in human history. Technological advancements made by them have revolutionized people’s original lifestyles and improved the quality of their lives. Yuan Longping, the “Father of hybrid rice”, dramatically boosts the production and his achievement is utilized throughout the world. Another devotion of scientists that cannot be neglected is that they shoulder the responsibility for popularity of science and technology, which helps wipe off ignorance and superstitions; geocentric theory of the universe brings a new face on people’s scientific knowledge. Unfortunately, their intentions may result in some negative consequence, out of their expectations. Whether GMF(Genetically modified food) is a blessing or curse is still under discussion.
In conclusion, we should admit that both politicians and scientists are driving force behind the social developments; they make contributions in various forms in different fields. It is their combined effort that promotes the progress of human society. On the other hand, the problems arising should not be underestimated.
专家点评：
本次考试题目要求考生比较政治家和科学家对社会的影响。应该说，可以扩展的内容还是很大的。因为题目中的关键词politician, scientist和influence的范围都很广，因此考生在完成这篇文章的时候可以从政治家和科学家对于社会，家庭和个人的影响上进行阐述。需要注意的是，考生要对这两者均进行比较，且要以实例来进行说服论证，没有具体的政治家和科学家的例子，文章将会相当枯燥且没有说服力。
范文在这一点上就做的很好，给出了非常切实的例子来进行说明。文章结构安排相当工整，也比较易读，如果能在结尾段给出自己的倾向，而不是以喊口号的方式结尾的话，文章将会更好。
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