4.参照提纲,紧扣主题句,完成段落。
Introduction: Television contributions to society, positive and negative, have been debated continually since this piece of technology invaded the average American household in the 1950s.
Topic sentences:
•1. TV distorts reality by selecting certain kinds of images and omitting others and by portraying people in a stereotyped way.
•2. TV affects human relationships as well as behavior by influencing our feelings about ourselves and our expectations for ourselves and others.
•3. Exposure to stereotyped presentations can easily influence viewers’ behavior toward unfamiliar people.
•4. Perhaps most serious are the effects of information distortions on the child’s self-image.
Conclusion:
•TV programs should demonstrate a realistic lifestyle and a responsible sense of behavior. The many hours children spend in front of the television can obviously influence their view of the world. According to TV, how does the world in fact work ? As a society, we cannot afford the consequences resulting from the distortions of reality portrayed every day in these shows.
5.检查和修改:
托福考试时间紧张,匆匆完稿之后,疏漏在所难免,因而有必要复查,修改,及时纠正偏差,堵塞漏洞,从而将作文质量再提高一步。建议大家主要针对以下五个重点部位仔细核查:
A 文章是否切题
B 句子是否相互连贯
检查上下文是否连贯,句子衔接是否自然流畅,检验的标准主要是句子是否通顺,该用过渡词的地方用了没有,以及所用的过渡词是否合适。
C 是否使用了一些错误的或不恰当的词语
D 是否有语法错误
主谓是否一致,动词的时态、语态、语气的使用是否正确,词组的搭配是否合乎习惯。为避免不必要的语法错误,对把握性不大的词组、句型绝不要用。而应使用那些自己熟悉的词组、句型来表达相同或相近的意思。
E 是否有大小写、拼写、标点错误,写作格式是否符合要求
写作格式规范容易赢得阅卷老师的印象分。留意下面一些常见格式要求:
文章标题用引号,
书名用斜体,
每段的第一行要空格,即留出4至5个字母的空格。
征服托福独立写作,唯有将文章结构、论点展开、语言技能完美的结合,一篇优秀的托福作文才能真正地横空出世。
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