1)简单介绍个人情况
2)说明申请助学贷款的原因、数额
3)保证会合理利用贷款并表明还款的决心
A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan
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行文思路
本题属于情景式命题，要求写一封申请信。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：简单介绍自己的情况，表明写信目的：申请助学贷款;说明申请助学贷款的原因、数额;保证合理利用贷款并表明还款决心，最后表示感谢。
高分范文
A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan
Sep 12th, 2008
To whom it may concern,
I am a freshman of Lianhe University, [1]majoring in Applied Physics. I am writing in the hope that I may obtain a bank loan to support my study in Applied Physics for the following four years.
My parents are both laid-off workers, so it’s [2]beyond their power to finance me through the college education. [3]To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation. [4]Therefore, [5]with the college tuition becoming a much heavier burden on my family, I am compelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan.
[6]I give you my promise that the loan would be used properly. [4]Meanwhile, I’ll [7]spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan. I would be greatly obliged if my application is granted. And I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours,
Song Xue
【亮点点评】
[1]“主修…”，现在分词作伴随状语。
[2]“超出…的能力范围”。
[3]“使事情更糟糕的是”。
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