1)根据调查,目前在全国的大城市中有大约80%的中学生都有私人家教
2)分析中学生请家教的利弊
3)你的看法
Does a Student Need Private Tutoring? _______________________________________________________________________________
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行文思路
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象,提纲第2点要求分析这种现象的利弊,提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”的看法,由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:描述中学生请家教的现状;分析中学生请家教的利弊;谈谈“我”对中学生请家教现象的看法。
高分范文
Does a Student Need Private Tutoring?
A recent investigation shows that about 70 percent of middle school students in cities have private tutors. Such a popular practice indicates that people are [1]attaching greater importance to education. [2]However, private tutoring [3]has both advantages and disadvantages.
Many parents have no enough ability or time to help their children in study. Private tutoring is a good solution to this problem. [2]In addition, private tutoring is usually one-to-one, so the teacher can know [4]the weak points as well as [4]the strong points of the pupil, and thus teaching is, [5]in most cases, directly to the point. [2]On the other hand, private tutoring has its own disadvantages.
[2]For one thing, it takes up so much of the pupil’s time that he can hardly find enough time for rest and entertainment. [2]For another, some tutors, [5]busy “shuttling” from one family to another, [6]tend to neglect their teaching duties as tutors.
[7]Considering the above-mentioned, I think [3]the disadvantages of private tutoring outweigh its advantages.
In my opinion, greater emphasis should be laid [8]on classroom teaching and practice, [8]on the improvement of teaching quality [8]and on the tapping of the pupil’s potential. [9]Only in this way can a new generation be healthily brought up.
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