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2009年6月大学英语六级写作试题考前热点高分范文(七)
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

  1)随着人们生活水平的提高,一些人认为节俭和朴素的生活方式已经过时了

  2)但是很多人反对这种说法

  3)你的看法是…,为什么?

  Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue?

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  行文思路

  本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一种观点,提纲第2点提出另外一种相反的观点,提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”的观点,由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。

  根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:提出第1种观点:节俭和朴素的生活方式已经过时了,并说明理由;提出第2种观点:节俭和朴素仍然是一种美德,并说明理由;表明“我”对节俭的看法,并说明理由。

  高分范文

  Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue?

  With the improvement of the living standards, many people are [1]no longer interested in the simple life style [2]and some of them even feel ashamed to be thrifty. What they pursue is the latest fashion. In their eyes, thrift is already out of style.

  [3]However, still other people insist that thrift is a good virtue. They say that the unprecedented power of production doesn’t mean that we are entitled to a life of extravagance, because our natural resources are limited [2]and some of them even are [4]on the decline. [5]Moreover, they hold that waste may lead to degradation of social atmosphere and environmental pollution as well.

  [6]As to me, I prefer the latter opinion. I believe [7] “Waste not, want not.” The truth of this saying is [8]not to give up comfort but to enhance efficiency. [5]In fact, economic growth depends enormously on saving. [5]Besides, there are still millions of Chinese [9]living under poverty line. We can never afford reckless waste. [5]Therefore, [10]it is no doubt that thrift is still a good virtue that we should not give up.

  【亮点点评】

  [1]“不再”。

  [2]表示递进。

  [3]引出另外一种观点。

  [4]“在下降”。

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