第二篇：习作者（vivy7）
Health is one of （the）perterbing(pertubable) questions(issues) among human beings(that people concerned about). Maybe the following thought-provoking picture can give us an answer: under the sunshine, a man with a basket of raw food on the left hand and a portfolio on the right is running gaily on the roadside, accompanied by a blissful dog; and the picture writes, （主谓搭配不当）"You can take exercises when lying,walking or sitting on a bus.The most vital problem is whether you are aware of it." （whether you have health awareness or not ）
What a simple but profound principle the picture has uttered（utters）! But how many of us can realize it? The man in the picture gets wholesome exercises for his health simply from the casual life. He understands that he doesn't have to set aside a period of time or even go to the special place to take exercises but he can get physical exercise whenever and wherever he wants. What we need is a normal attitude toward life and some minutes to relax (some leisure time to enjoy).
As far as I am concerned, I think the man has set an exellent(excellent)example for us to keep fit in such a quick-paced life. What we need is to take physical exercises seriously and think out more ordinary approaches to (take) care (of) our health. And I believe life will be more fabulous than ever before (去掉)if we take action from now on.
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