问题内容: Writing Fast Development of Joint Ventures in City A Since 改革 and open policy,more and more joint ventures have created in China,and they developed very fast. Now we give an example to show the development of joint ventures in city A. In 1990,798 companies were approved, and 323 companies were in production, the number of industrial enterprises was 579. Total investment were $42.71 billion and total foreign fund has reached $19.34 billion. Next we compare the data with 1989 and 1990,from January to August, there were several items to illustate development. Total industrial value in 1989 was $1.95 billion,next year was $6.44 billion. Total sale in 1989 was $5.14 billion, it increased to $7.30 billion in 1990. Foreign exchange was only $1.40 billion last year,and it was $2.10 billion in 1990. Finally we look at the information which 26 countries and areas have invested in this city. The largest invest area was Hongkong,43% of total. Japan was less than Hongkong, its proportion was 19%, then America was 16%. These three countrise and areas' investment were 78%, and other 23 countries were 22%. Those data showed the fast development of joint ventures in city A,and at the same time we can get conclusion how fast in China.
老师回复: 你好! 我的修改如下: Fast Development of Joint Ventures in City A since the Reform and Open Policy More and more joint ventures have been established in China and they are developing very fast. Now we give an example to show the development of joint ventures in city A. In 1990, 798 companies were approved, and 323 companies were in production, and the number of industrial enterprises was 579. Total investment were $42.71 billion and total foreign fund has reached $19.34 billion. Next we compare the data with 1989 and 1990, from January to August, there were several items to illustate development. Total industrial value in 1989 was $1.95 billion, and next year was $6.44 billion. Total sale in 1989 was $5.14 billion, it increased to $7.30 billion in 1990. Foreign exchange was only $1.40 billion last year,and it was $2.10 billion in 1990. Finally we look at the information which 26 countries and areas have invested in this city. The largest invest area was Hongkong, 43% of total. Japan was less than Hongkong, its proportion was 19%, then America was 16%. These three countries and areas' investment were 78%, and other 23 countries were 22%. Those data showed the fast development of joint ventures in city A,and at the same time we can get conclusion how fast in China.
问题内容: Writing E-mail Nowadays,more and more people are exchanging a great varity of information by using this hightech communication tool,instead of traditional way of mailing letters. E-mail makes the relationship among people closer than before. Through e-mail,people who live in different cities can keep in touch with each other at any time. Wherever you go,you may send e-mails to your friends and tell them about yourself. Maybe you have lost your classmates' information for a long time,and e-mail can be easily received at some time. A lovely picture can be sent to you families' mail box,if you would like. It's easier for people to communicate. The more convenient to send mail, the more people use it,only a computer is needed. Whenever you want,wherever you stay,an e-mail can connect with you and your friends. The relationship among people get better than ever. You can send an e-mail to an old friend if even it's late at night and only several seconds later it reaches his box. A stamp and the postman is not needed, allis finished by yourself. In my opinion,e-mail will make our lives richer and relationships closer.
老师回复: 你好!我的修改如下: Nowadays,more and more people are exchanging a great varity of information by using this hightech communication tool instead of the traditional way of writing letters. E-mail makes the relationship among people closer than before. Through e-mails,people who live in different cities can keep in touch with each other at any time. Wherever you go,you may send e-mails to your friends and tell them about yourself. Maybe you have lost your classmates' information for a long time,and an e-mail can be easily received at some time. A lovely picture can be sent to your families' mail box if you would like. It's easier for people to communicate. The more convenient to send mails, the more people use it, and only a computer is needded. Whenever you want,wherever you stay,an e-mail can connect with you and your friends. The relationship among people get better than ever. You can send an e-mail to an old friend if even it's late at night and only several seconds later it reaches his box. A stamp and the postman are not needed, and it can be finished only by yourself. In my opinion,e-mail will make our lives richer and relationships closer.
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